I agree with everything in the post. The real world is hardly ever as clear cut as it is shown in the world of play dialogue. People are always cutting each other off and interrupting one another. So it would only be right that a fight s the same. Seeing as I've never been in a real fight i can only speak through second hand reports from friends. But in a fight there is no you go, I go, you go. It is all heat of the moment. So to fight like Mamet Write would be to create a very accurate portrayal.
Peter and Fred:
This fight i found to be very realistic, As I could see the fatigue in the combatants. The pause points in the fight helped to convey not only the fatigue, but also to allow time for the audience to keep up. I also liked the bit of humor added to the fight. With the smokes and the kicking deflect.
Bruce and Maggie:
I didn't get the dog humping his leg but i did get the kick. Which was a bit funny. I felt the moves could have been worked together a bit more almost seemed clunky. However in the end, id say it was a good fight.
Clara and Habel:
I felt there was something holding this piece back as if they were hesitate to touch one another. But other than the it was a solid fight. Their sight lines were very well set (at least from where i was sitting.) And overall was a decent fight.
Sam and Anthony:
The choke out no winner ending was great but it felt rushed. But the rest was well plotted. The fight Itself had a great sense of flow to it. A clear beginning and end.
Gina, Tatum, and Cheseny:
First congrats on doing a three way fight it must have been a real challenge. But it was well executed. I found everything to be well putt together.
Micayla and Brittany:
CAT FIGHT!! sorry had to say it. Any who, this fight was well put together and presented well had a great sense of humor to it as well as great sight lines and vocal inflections. Well done.
As for my fight i believe we did a good job could of worked more on sight lines and our hits. But overall we did a good job i think.
So all in all good job everyone with your Unarmed fights.
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